Tag Archives: the vortex

Receiving Notes and Making Changes

What is a note you may ask? Notes are feedback given whenever your script is read. I have many, many notes on The Vortex now and take each one to heart, thinking how and if they could make the script … Continue reading

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New Working Title – TV Pilot

It’s been a busy couple of weeks here at the ranch – not only have I been able to ride BOTH my boys, but I’ve put together a very rough draft of the pilot based on the crypto series AND … Continue reading

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Back in the Saddle Again

I hope you are hearing Aerosmith in the background as you read this post – It’s playing while I’m writing! It’s embarrassing how long it’s been since I have graced the seat of saddle – no more excuses! The Florida … Continue reading

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The Vortex on TV?

I’ve been receiving more interest on The Vortex lately – but the question that keeps coming up is as a feature or a TV series? I’d love to know what you think!

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Alternate Endings

I recently received coverage for The Vortex – a professional reader’s opinion as to whether or not a screenplay would be recommended for purchase. While it’s not there YET, I received some amazing feedback as well as suggestions on where and … Continue reading

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Inspiration

Sometimes we all need a little inspiration to keep up going. I was faced with that recently when I wanted to start the third (and final) screenplay for The Vortex franchise.  They say that a picture is worth a thousand … Continue reading

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The Vortex Synopsis (revealed)

Thank you to everyone who helped tweak the logline over the past few weeks! Here it is: SYNOPSIS The Vortex is a family fantasy about three kids who visit their aunt’s ranch for summer vacation. They soon discover the ranch … Continue reading

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Screenwriting Baby Steps

Thank you to everyone who sent in suggestions for loglines – you have no idea how helpful it is – just one word can spark the imagination! I have found myself in a strange, new world – stranger than my … Continue reading

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Logline Help!

This amazing journey from novel to screenplay is filled with so many twists and turns it’s difficult to know where it stands from day to day. The editor returned the full screenplay with lots of comments and suggestions – enough … Continue reading

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The Vortex Update

Things change quickly here at the Triple H these days. It seems as soon as I get one blog out, there is more news to share. This week is no different. Last week I sent the first 15 pages of … Continue reading

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