Opinions Needed

When I finished the first draft of Within Emerald Forests, the first book of the four book crypto-zoology series, I was confronted with an issue: titles

Here’s where I need some help. The current titles are plural: Within Emerald Forests, Beneath Diamond Waters, Under Sapphire Skies, and Across Ruby Fields

BUT I’m not writing about multiple forests, waters, skies, or fields -just one per story…

So, would it make more sense to add the word ‘the’ to specify that they are only one, such as: Within the Emerald Forest, Beneath the Diamond Waters, Under the Sapphire Sky, and Across the Ruby Field.

Please – leave a comment with your opinion!

 

About Heather Hamel

Growing up with horses is a little girls dream come true. Heather’s dream in life was to be a horse trainer - how dreams change - sort of! She moved to the wonderfully historic town of St. Augustine, Florida and was a historic tour guide and a ghost story teller while putting herself through college to become a special education teacher. After graduating, she felt the pull of horses in her life again. That's when she met Kobi! She learned quickly that when you own horses you become a part time vet, part time nutritionist, and full time equestrian. She wouldn't change a thing! In addition to being completely obsessed with her herd, she still teaches and tutors students with learning disabilities, and more specifically, dyslexia.
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2 Responses to Opinions Needed

  1. ECA says:

    I would add “the” to your title J. E

  2. Mom says:

    I think it’s like a great painting, where the artist just keeps starring at the painting, and keeps adding more paint. Don’t over think…..I think the titles are great as they are! Like the popular song “Blue sky’s shining above” that’s plural but you know the song is just about one sky. That’s my opinion!!

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